Fluid Emotion

Morning dew is evidence of sweet release upon vestal valleys and rolling hills of Mother Earth.

Passion spent now heat must vent, vapor rise and evaporate with tent while emotion bent, the off-shore fog rolls in.

Fresh spring flowers to while-away the hours, while coaxing green and budding things to cover Earth Mother anew.

Drizzle maybe happy tears if most the day still shines; but when the day stays dull and gray, and blustery defines it well, listen for the bells that tell the heartfelt pain of loss when nature-born is spirit-bound, and bids this world adieu.

Hurricanes and himmicanes bring spousal trouble to bear when Nature’s give-and-take has forgotten how to share; and nothing gets said easily, every word is an accusation till it peters out with sad frustration leaving a tail in its wake of mass destruction.

Steady rain is a time to dance, Sky Father is playful and giving; his candle is lightning, his music is thunder, his flowers the scent of the living… as he bathes his true love with sacred tears.

If you find your path is flooded with a deluge pouring down, you know mankind once more has fallen and the Creator’s wrath abounds; so don’t open your umbrella, stay behind closed doors, and wait for signs of joy before you venture forth; for many who tempt the waters wind-up drowning in their fears.

 

© JW Thomas

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18 thoughts on “Fluid Emotion

    • jwtatfbc April 8, 2016 / 3:01 am

      No, you are right, I crammed a lot in a small piece, my friend.

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      • jwtatfbc April 8, 2016 / 3:10 am

        I’m glad, it felt good when I wrote it. It flowed out fairly quick.

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      • Mary Cathleen Clark April 8, 2016 / 3:17 am

        And it IS good. I had a fairly productive day…have just about gotten the next installment of Sins of the Fathers ready to post. Only one more after tomorrow’s.

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      • jwtatfbc April 8, 2016 / 3:19 am

        Thank you again. And fantastic! I’m looking forward to reading them both. It’s been a wild ride.

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      • Mary Cathleen Clark April 8, 2016 / 3:23 am

        Thank you for saying so. 🙂 It has been a wild ride for me editing two manuscripts at the same time.

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      • jwtatfbc April 8, 2016 / 3:25 am

        I can definitely believe that. Especially if they are totally different in character, plot, etc.

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      • Mary Cathleen Clark April 8, 2016 / 3:30 am

        Yes, the one Dave will be working on in a few weeks is a paranormal romance/coming of age/young adult type thing. I’ll have to ask Dave how he would classify it because I don’t know.

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      • jwtatfbc April 8, 2016 / 3:32 am

        Well, you know that I’m interested in any creative work you do, my friend. How long before you think it’s ready to submit?

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      • Mary Cathleen Clark April 8, 2016 / 3:36 am

        At least 3 or 4 months. After I get it back from Dave, I’ll have to incorporate his edit, then send it out to a couple of beta readers and get their opinion. And while waiting, I’ll have to write the dreaded synopsis.

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      • jwtatfbc April 8, 2016 / 3:38 am

        Well, at least you have a set plan in motion and are steadily working towards the goal. That’s great. And I wish you all the best in the world on this venture, my friend.

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      • Mary Cathleen Clark April 8, 2016 / 3:43 am

        Thank you, JW. As you know, I’ve been down this road before, and it’s an uphill battle all the way just to get your foot in the door.

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      • jwtatfbc April 8, 2016 / 3:45 am

        I definitely know, and respect you for continuing to try. It was hard doing the scripts as well. And all I ever broke into was the live shows by performance troupes; and that only occurred because I was in one of the groups, so they took a chance on my writing.

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      • Mary Cathleen Clark April 8, 2016 / 3:51 am

        Anymore, it seems as if one has to know someone on the inside or be a celebrity to get noticed. The powers that be don’t like to take chances on unknowns.

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      • jwtatfbc April 8, 2016 / 3:53 am

        Sad, but true; especially with the cost of producing or publishing going through the roof. It is a tight knit group; but every once in awhile you see someone break through, so it still can be done.

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      • Mary Cathleen Clark April 8, 2016 / 3:56 am

        Yes…all one can do is hope.
        I think I’m off to bed now, JW. Good night and sweet dreams.

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      • jwtatfbc April 8, 2016 / 3:57 am

        Okay, my friend. Good night and sweet dreams to you as well.

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